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First Draft: Three Ways Screenwriters Can Master the Art of Remixing

First Draft: Three Ways Screenwriters Can Master the Art of Remixing

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Filmmaker Kirby Ferguson defined the state of Hollywood best when he named his popular Vimeo series Everything Is a Remix. In film, that statement is 100 percent accurate.

Filmmakers and screenwriters are slaves of their influences. Even the greats like Steven Spielberg, Martin Scorsese and Quentin Tarantino create films—and moments within their films—that are remixes of what they love, what they grew up with and what continues to engage them today.

In the studio system, we have reboots, remakes, sequels, multi-universe franchises, genre storytelling, etc. Many consider this to be a weakness in Hollywood, however, nothing could be further from the truth. All storytelling ends up being a remix in the end, influenced in some way, shape or form by what has graced the stage, page or screen before them.

Ferguson’s video series, specifically showcased in the example we’re using below—Everything Is a Remix: The Force Awakens—showcases the three elements of remixing. Here we’ll break them down, using Star Wars: The Force Awakens and other films as examples, and then apply that earned knowledge to how screenwriters can best benefit from a proper remixing of stories, characters and concepts.

As you’ll see in the video, the three elements of remixing are:

  • Copying
  • Transforming
  • Combining

Copying

Copying entails taking an element from previous content and placing it within something new in near “as-is” form. In the original Star Wars, George Lucas often copied specific camera shots taken from other films, as you saw in the video.

Almost 40 years later, J.J. Abrams took copying to a whole different level. Many can argue that George Lucas did the same with Star Wars—storylines and themes lifted from The Hidden Fortress, Lord of the Rings, and Flash Gordon—however, some feel that Abrams went a step further. Despite the critical accolades and unbelievable box office success, Star Wars Episode VII: The Force Awakens does have detractors and many of their complaints stem from the extensive copying that Abrams did.

As the video details, these are some of the copied elements from the original Star Wars that are found in The Force Awakens:

  • Old Jedi Needs to be Found
  • Vital Information in a Droid
  • Droid Found by Orphan
  • Stormtroopers Search for the Vital Information and Kill People
  • Heroes Narrowly Escape in Millennium Falcon
  • Orphan Forms Relationship with Elder
  • Han Solo has a Confrontation with Someone He Owes Money to
  • Space Bar with Wacky Creatures
  • Planet-like Weapon that Destroys Planets
  • Villain Murders the Elder Figure while Hero Watches
  • Heroes Go Into the Planet-like Weapon to Incapacitate Something
  • Ships Fly Down a Trench to Shoot a Particular Spot

Outright copying can create frustration among audiences.

In the context of screenwriting, this is often a frustration that many script readers have as they read endless scripts throughout the year. Too many writers, perhaps with full knowledge of how everything really is a remix, copy such elements from films that have already debuted. Some stories and characters seem to be directly lifted from other scripts and placed into others. Hollywood is clearly guilty of this as well.

However, The Force Awakens also managed to rise above what would otherwise have been a copy cat of a script by also embracing the second element of remixing.

Transforming

Transforming entails taking an element from previous content and literally transforming it into something else to offer something new.

While The Force Awakens is clearly guilty of copying many elements from the original, the sequel also has many new transforming elements:

  • Hero Is a Woman
  • Male Lead Is a Former Stormtrooper
  • The Villain Is Failure Prone and Not a Master

These are the storylines that stand out the most in The Force Awakens, primarily because they offer new transformed takes on otherwise copied elements. Yes, the hero is still an orphan on a desert planet. However, the hero is a young woman this time around, living on her own. Yes, there is a masked villain that embraces the Dark Side of the Force. However, he hasn’t mastered it yet and is clearly much like Luke Skywalker was in the first two original trilogy movies, only Kylo Ren is learning the ways of the Dark Side instead of the Light.

Combining

Combining entails taking an element that exists in popular and proven fashion in previous content and combining it with another element that usually exists in popular and proven fashion in entirely different content.

The original Alien took a monster flick and put it into the world of space travel.

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Its sequel, Aliens, took that concept and injected it into the world of a soldier movie.

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Titanic took the age old love story of Romeo and Juliet and placed it in the world of the ill-fated Titanic…

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… much like West Side Story took the same love story and placed it in the world of street gangs, focusing on both the love story and the feuds between the two gangs.

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So What Have We Learned?

The lesson learned between the three remixing elements of copying, transforming and combining is that the best remix is comprised of at least two of those elements.

Had The Force Awakens not utilized those transforming elements, it would have likely been thought of as more of a remake than a sequel.

Here’s where it gets interesting, especially for screenwriters.

Audiences Love the Familiar

There is a reason that we see so many reboots, remakes, sequels, multi-universe franchises, genre storytelling, etc. Audiences show up for them in droves. Yet when they see nothing but a retread of what has come before—copying—such films aren’t as successful as those that copy, transform and combine. With superhero movies, the general origin stories are overly familiar but the new characters and their situations are what keeps audiences coming back. When sequels to those films debut, especially with the likes of multi-universe franchises like the Marvel Cinematic Universe, audiences are enthralled with the combining aspects of seeing their favorite superheroes in the mix with others.

For genre films—horror, action, thriller—audiences love to see combinations and transformations. How many haunted house movies have there been in the last two decades? Despite a great many of them, audiences often keep coming back for more as long as there are different elements within the otherwise copied haunted house concepts. The same can be said for action movies and thrillers.

Familiarity Isn’t the Only Thing Audiences Love

Audiences also love the novel, the unusual and the innovative. As the video states, however, it’s a smaller and more risk-oriented market.

Between Familiar Films and Novel Films, you’ll find that box office numbers showcase a favor for the familiar while critics often favor the novel.

This is where screenwriters need to do their own second layer of remixing to find those gems.

Using the Remix to Succeed in Hollywood

Everything is indeed a remix. Using what we’ve learned about the three elements of remixing—copying, transforming and combining—screenwriters need to incorporate what we’ve also learned about what audiences respond to.

We know they love the familiar, yet we know that we have to transform and combine in order to keep their interest beyond that. We also know that there are niche audiences that embrace the novel concepts.

In Hollywood, because audiences love the familiar, so do the studios and major production companies. It is show business after all. But like audiences, Hollywood isn’t content with screenwriters simply copying what has proven to be already successful.

Studios don’t want more of the same, especially from newcomers. While the product that they release may seem to say otherwise, for every copy cat studio-like script that you write, there are a hundred more circulating endlessly through Hollywood.

Screenwriters need to find that hybrid of what is familiar and what is novel, unusual and innovative. Those are the types of scripts that can make a career, whether they get made in the end or not.

Ex Machina took the ever-so-familiar concept of artificial intelligence (Terminator franchise, A.I., and Blade Runner) and made it smaller, contained, and more cerebral.

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Looper took the popular time travel concept, then transformed and combined it by having the lead protagonist being hired to kill his older self.

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Everything is a remix, yes, there’s no escaping that. But it’s how you remix things that matters most. Do it poorly by just copying and you’ll never sell a script or get your writing noticed. Do it well by copying, transforming and combining—you’ll stand apart from the rest and offer audiences and Hollywood something familiar, but new. MM

This post originally appeared on the blog ScreenCraft. ScreenCraft is dedicated to helping screenwriters and filmmakers succeed through educational events, screenwriting competitions and the annual ScreenCraft Screenwriting Fellowship program, connecting screenwriters with agents, managers and Hollywood producers. Follow ScreenCraft on TwitterFacebook, and YouTube.

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    Axe

    August 5, 2016 at 10:30 am

    This is a dumb, silly article written for 5 year olds.
    “The Force Awakens” was more reboot than sequel and blew it from a creative lasting standpoint.

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